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A simple story framework for creating timeless characters.
The most fundamental way to layer the art + science of story seamlessly together is by rooting everything in a character’s desire.
The desire (I refer to the desire as the Want in the main Storytelling Magic program, but both terms can be used), to be most effective, is rooted in a -
wound - something from their past that has colored their worldview and affected their choices, guiding the course of their life.
From that wound, we get emotional honesty. This is the story art.
Emotional honesty is simply a set of emotions that are real and honest for the storyteller. We know whether or not they were honest based on how the story (and the character experiencing the emotions) impacts us as a reader. The most impactful stories are the ones that make us feel, and this is accomplished when emotions come from an honest place within the storyteller.
A storyteller can only create a truly impactful character once they are willing to tap into this set of emotions.Finally, the desire, along with its set of correlating emotions - both of which have stemmed from the character’s wound - circle back in the climax.
3 layers down
In his book The Emotional Craft of Fiction, Donald Maass discusses the concept of the third-level emotion.
This is simply when a storyteller takes the obvious emotion a character would be feeling in a given moment and then goes a level deeper. Humans experience a rainbow of emotions always. In other words, there is always another emotion to choose.
But it’s called the third-level emotion. So what does the storyteller do next? They go yet another layer deeper and grab a third unexpected but relevant emotion.
This technique allows the storyteller to surprise their reader as well as themselves.
It gives a deeper look into a given moment and its emotionality. It allows the storyteller more honesty and depth and offers the reader a more unexpected and emotional experience.
You can see this playing out in the examples below.
Each character wound creates emotion. But in a good story, it creates a rainbow of surprising, but honest emotions that touch the surface throughout the course of the story. In a really good story, this technique is applied to each and every character.
Why does this work?
Put simply, this technique works so well because readers like to be challenged.
My husband works in marketing, and we often discuss why some of his projects that he consults on take off when others don’t.
The answer is that the consumer is challenged…but not too much.
For example, he recently worked on a voice training program that is designed to help singers become better, which it does by making singing an athletic event. Develop more flexibility, strength, and coordination in your vocal cords and you’ll become a better singer. This is a surprising and unexpected approach to singing…but it’s still familiar. It still makes sense.
People crave comfort and familiarity, but they also want to grow and be challenged.
This explains why the “3 layers down” rule works so well. When you go three layers down with a character’s emotion, you arrive at something unexpected. Something that will challenge and surprise readers…but not too much.
It’s still just an emotion. It’s still relatable. Something the reader has almost certainly experienced, just perhaps not in that context.
This technique literally engages a reader’s brain psychologically. It invests them in the story more.
So the technique has a whole array of benefits going for it!
It engages the storyteller by forcing them to dig deeper with their character and craft and by making them confront unexpected emotions from a place of honesty.
And it engages the reader for the same reasons. That surprise, however subtle it may be, catches our attention. It grips us, and it makes us more likely to remember the experience of reading the story.
Putting it all together
Click on the characters to read about their story framework. But beware - they include spoilers.
Harry Potter
Harry has a wound of being bullied by his aunt, uncle, and cousin.
From that wound, he feels a desire to protect others from bullies.
Rowling had honesty with the emotions that are rooted in and stem from that wound (helplessness, courage, selflessness, sacrifice, love).
This desire circles back in the climax when Harry protects Hogwarts from the bully attempting to steal the Sorcerer’s Stone.
- Helplessness is an obvious emotion one might expect someone to experience when being bullied. But sacrifice? This is an unexpected and honest emotion that elevates Harry Potter to a great character.
Kaz Brekker (Six of Crows)
- Kaz has a wound of his brother dying.
- From that wound, he feels a desire to accumulate power.
- Bardugo had honesty with the emotions that are rooted in and stem from that wound (helplessness, grief, anger, determination, resilience).
- This desire circles back in the climax when Kaz tries to outsmart Van Eck in order to get money (power), and ends up unable to protect someone else he loves.
- Grief is the obvious emotion here. But determination is an unexpected emotion that rounds out Kaz, giving him greater complexity and emotional honesty.
Jane Eyre
- Jane has a wound of her aunt witholding love from her.
- From that wound, she feels a desire for belonging and love.
- Bronte had honesty with the emotions that are rooted in and stem from that wound (loneliness, rejection, independence, love, inner strengthe).
- This desire circles back in the climax when Jane must learn to love herself before she can accept love from others.
- Rejection is a natural emotion to feel when someone who ought to love you witholds any form of affection. But Jane Eyre is a timeless character because she also sprouted inner strength from this experience.